From be12054f56304b14d71a284e8d182c318c54b6ac Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Thomas Cole <thomas.patrick.cole@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 14 Feb 2022 16:03:59 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Minor tweaks.

---
 index.html | 27 +++++++++++++++------------
 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index 0218287..8a66d54 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -37,6 +37,7 @@
 				padding: 0;
 				margin: 0;
 			}
+
 		</style>
 
 
@@ -71,7 +72,7 @@
 								<li class="fragment fade-in">Maintain physical infrastructure</li>
 								<li class="fragment fade-in">Update software</li>
 								<li class="fragment fade-in">Setup Zoom calls</li>
-								<li class="fragment fade-in">Fix printers</li>
+								<li class="fragment fade-in">Fix printers, phones, computers, etc...</li>
 								<li class="fragment fade-in">Develop websites</li>
 								<li class="fragment fade-in">Repair or replace obsolete hardware</li>
 								<li class="fragment fade-in">And as always...  other duties as assigned</li>
@@ -83,13 +84,13 @@
 
 				<section>
 					<div style="text-align: left;">
-						<p>But I can do those things!</p>
+						<p>"But I can do those things!"</p>
 					</div>
 					<hr>
 					<div class="r-stack">
 						<div class="align-left fill-width fill-height">
 							<ul>
-								<li class="fragment fade-in">Can it scale?</li>
+								<li class="fragment fade-in">Is it scalable?</li>
 								<li class="fragment fade-in">Is it secure?</li>
 								<li class="fragment fade-in">What happens when someone leaves?</li>
 								<li class="fragment fade-in">What happens when something breaks?</li>
@@ -112,6 +113,8 @@
 					</aside>
 				</section>
 
+				<!-- Add background to build the case. SBT, John clarke, Campus wide zoom calls. Immediacy of being on site.  -->
+
 				<section id="how-much">
 					<h2>How much will this cost?</h2>
 					<hr>
@@ -130,8 +133,8 @@
 								<li class="fragment fade-in">Technology is ever changing</li>
 								<li class="fragment fade-in">The 'as a service' model adds up</li>
 								<li class="fragment fade-in">Business class internet is a rip off</li>
-								<li class="fragment fade-in">Remote work means more reliance on the cloud.</li>
-								<li class="fragment fade-in">There isn't a one size fits all solution.</li>
+								<li class="fragment fade-in">Remote work means more reliance on the cloud</li>
+								<li class="fragment fade-in">There isn't a one size fits all solution</li>
 							</ul>
 						</div>
 					</div>
@@ -152,7 +155,7 @@
 
 				<section>
 					<div style="text-align: left;">
-						<p>No money no problem</p>
+						<p>No money, no problem</p>
 					</div>
 					<hr>
 					<div class="r-stack">
@@ -189,7 +192,7 @@
 						<div class="align-left fill-width fill-height">
 							<ul>
 								<li class="fragment fade-in">It benefits you to buy the best you can afford</li>
-								<li class="fragment fade-in">One mans trash is not always another's treasure</li>
+								<li class="fragment fade-in">One man's trash is not always another's treasure</li>
 								<li class="fragment fade-in">You need to be ok upgrading</li>
 							</ul>
 						</div>
@@ -226,10 +229,10 @@
 						<div class="align-left fill-width fill-height">
 							<ul>
 								<li>It benefits you to buy the best you can afford</li>
-								<li>One mans trash is not always anther's treasure</li>
+								<li>One man's trash is not always anther's treasure</li>
 								<li>You need to be ok upgrading</li>
 								<li class="fragment fade-in">Sometimes a paid solution is the best</li>
-								<li class="fragment fade-in">Paying an expert can save you a lot of headache</li>
+								<li class="fragment fade-in">Paying an expert can save you a lot of headaches</li>
 							</ul>
 						</div>
 					</div>
@@ -249,7 +252,7 @@
 				<section id="hardware">
 					<h2>Nuts and Bolts</h2>
 					<hr>
-					<p>Lets talk hardware</p>
+					<p>Let's talk hardware</p>
 				</section>
 
 				<section>
@@ -498,9 +501,9 @@
 				</section>
 
 				<section id="question">
-					<h2>Thank you!</h2>
+					<h2>Questions?</h2>
 					<hr>
-					<p>Questions?</p>
+					<p></p>
 				</section>
 			</div>
 		</div>